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Excellence in Statements for Admission to Graduate School in Engineering

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Why I want to help you get accepted to graduate school in Engineering.

I particularly enjoy working on behalf of applicants to graduate programs in engineering because of the great respect that I have for the engineer. He or she recognizes that the greatest merit is the work, so they exercise their profession because they are committed to serving society, attending to the welfare and progress of the majority. By transforming nature for the benefit of mankind, the engineer must increase their awareness of the world as the abode of man and his interest in the universe is a guarantee of overcoming their spirit and knowledge of reality to make it fairer and happier. It is an inescapable duty of the engineer to hold the prestige of the profession and ensure its proper discharge; also maintain a professional demeanor rooted in the ability, honesty, fortitude, temperance, magnanimity, modesty, honesty and justice, with the consciousness of individual well-being subordinate to the good social. 

I help more applicants to graduate school in the area of Engineering than in any other field. This is because I have promoted my service in this area and I have done so because I see it as holding singular importance for our advancement as a planetary society. From urban centers to remote corners of Earth, the depths of the oceans to space, I have spent decade following events and issues in Engineering because I adore the way that humanity has always sought to transcend barriers, overcome challenges, and create opportunities that improve life in our part of the universe.

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Sample 1st Paragraph Mechanical, Robotics

I will never cease to constantly hide my talents as an engineer. If I am silent, I am forgotten. I reject the stationary position because it is always the beginning of the end. I seek optimal preparation for a career on the cutting edge of advancement in embedded technology/ robotics/control system/optical technologies. My goal is to pursue a career in research, either in industry or in academia. I feel strongly that laboring incessantly in the battle for new advancement, breakthroughs, especially creative angles in this field: it is here that I can make my contribution to society. As an Indian student, I crave a Western education. I have selected your program at XXXX University as my first choice for study because of the excellence of the ongoing research undertaken by your faculty.

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Saumple 1st Paragraph for the MS Degree in Electrical Engineering, Latino Engineer

I am the son of Hispanic immigrants, neither of whom finished high school. Nevertheless, the flame of education was never extinguished in my family. On the contrary, my parents dedicated their lives to the cause of helping me and my siblings to get a quality education and to pursue the profession of our choice. When I was only 5 years old, my father began teaching me algebra; in fact, we learned together. The extra time that my dad spent with me studying, reading, learning together as we always have, would come to fuel a passion over time for science, and especially technology.