Statements of Excellence for Admission to Graduate School in Early Chlldhood Studies

Sample 1st Paragraph for the MA in Early Childhood Studies, Canada, Saudi Woman

I am a young woman from Saudi Arabia who now lives in Canada. As the mother of a premature child, I have become profoundly focused on the area of Early Childhood Studies and I want very much to build on my volunteer experience here in Canada helping out with kindergarten age children. My undergraduate studies in Saudi Arabia were also focused on Early Childhood Studies.

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Sample 1st Paragraph for the Master’s Degree in Early Childhood Education

I am aware that early childhood education requires teachers with specific characteristics and skills to successfully engage young children in the learning process. Among the most important characteristics, in my view, are exceptional patience and determination, highly developed observational skills including an ability to interpret non-verbal signals, enthusiasm, an ability to empathise, the desire to develop potential in every child and, most importantly a genuine love of children.  After long consideration and much interaction with young children, I strongly believe that I possess the natural characteristics and now seek to acquire the skills and knowledge to supplement these to become an excellent, effective and caring teacher. Among Master’s Degree programs in Early Childhood Education, XXXX is my first choice for a variety of reasons in addition to the location, most of all the sheer excellence of your program.

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Originally from the United States, I have now made my home in Bolivia at 56 years old. After earning my PHD in Religion (1995) from the University of Southern California, I have traveled much of the world, particularly Latin America. Since 2001, I have dedicated the bulk of my efforts to helping others to be accepted to graduate school, university, residency programs, etc.

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Sample 1st Paragraph for Certificate Program Childhood Development

I am applying to your distinguished certificate program in childhood development because of my intense fascination with how children learn at very early ages, before kindergarten. I hope to put the tools that I will acquire in your program to work, teaching techniques that will help young children with autism to develop fine motor and gross motor along with social skills. I aim to come up with solutions by creating short and long term goals, observing, testing and teaching small children, collaborating with interdisciplinary staff, working constantly to decrease negative behaviors and reinforce positive learning. In 2004, I graduated from XXXX High School with my high school diploma. After high school, I attended XXXX College and received my Associate of Arts degree in Liberal Arts in July 2007. Immediately after, I had the opportunity of attending XXXX University where I graduated in 2010 with my Bachelors of Science in Child and Adolescent Development.