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I would be honored by the opportunity to help you with your Personal Statement or Statement of Purpose for graduate or advanced professional study in business. Together, we will be building a new tomorrow for us all through the promotion of community friendly business practices world-wide. My service is highly international and I help applicants from all over the world. With each statement that I draft, I emphasize the strong points of each candidate, especially those unique qualities and experiences that allow you to stand out from the crowd and point to the important contributions that you are uniquely qualified to make to economic development over the long term. In most cases, you need an extremely well written statement in order to be accepted. For this reason, I feel strongly that my service is an excellent investment for you to make in your future.

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 Business as Human Salvation: The Personal Statement of Purpose for Business School.

At the center of my own interest in business stands the concept of ‘socially responsible’ business practices. Over the course of the last 15 years or so that I have been dedicated full time to drafting personal statements or statements of purpose for admission to programs of advanced study, the importance of business, particularly large corporations, assuming responsibility for their actions and actively promoting community responsibility, even progressive social advancement, has become widely recognized. This is now the new mainstream line of thinking in the business world: what is good for the community, in short, is also good for business.

As a result, if I were to help you with your statement for admission to a business program, I would do everything that I could to portray you as someone who would be a highly responsible member of the business community, someone who is highly sensitive to social issues and the importance of the business community giving something back to the broader society.

Sample 1st Paragraph for the MSc in Investment & Wealth Management, Diversity, World Traveler Raised in London

Still only 22, I have distinguished myself as both a dedicated student and a volunteer worker for international development projects. Your distinguished program at XXXX University is my first choice for graduate study in Investment & Wealth Management for a variety of reasons most of all its sheer excellence. I understand that admission to your program is most competitive but I hope to be selected due the highly international character of both my identity and my long term goals of service to society, especially with respect to the Developing World. Born and raised in London to a Polish mother and an Egyptian father, I am a world traveler, a global citizen, and someone who is already fluent in oral and written Arabic and learning to write it, at the same time that I continue to make vast progress at perfecting my Spanish, writing and speaking as well as reading this all important language for the future of global affairs. I lived in Madrid for 6 months and I have spent significant periods of time in Poland, Egypt, the USA, Germany, France, Italy, Spain, Thailand, Malaysia, UAE-Dubai, Portugal, Turkey, Morocco, and Sweden.

Statements of Excellence for Graduate School in Management

Business & Ethics

I believe that a strong case can be made that business is our best hope for addressing the many problems and overcoming the many challenges faced by humanity, everywhere on the globe. Thus, I help you to develop an articulation of your goals that is eloquent, and demonstrates the nobility of your unique cause, your dreams for your future in business.

As someone with a PHD in Religion and Social Ethics, I have long been most interested with the aspects of corporate governance which fall generally under the category of 'social responsibility'. I am committed to encouraging high quality interdisciplinary scholarship and teaching in practical and professional ethics by educators and practitioners who appreciate the theoretical and practical impacts of their subjects. I seek to promote ethical practices in business and advocate the need for ethics as part of business courses, providing a forum for ethicists to discuss and exchange ideas on teaching, training and consulting in the field of business ethics.

Empowering women in business and management. There is a growing recognition that women in senior management positions make good business sense and more women are moving into top management and starting successful enterprises than ever before.

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Middle Eastern Women Managers. Although governments in the Middle East are increasing women's access to education, Arab women are still underrepresented in the job market, particularly at the executive positions.

Sample 1st Paragraph for the Master’s Degree in International Public Management at the XXXX School of International Affairs, Korean Applicant, Program in France

I am a student from Korea, still 22, and I recently finished my undergraduate studies in History. I feel strongly that studying history has helped me to better appreciate the opportunities and responsibility involved in being a public servant, especially in the complex arena of international relations, law, and management. Your program in International Public Management at the XXXX School is my first choice for graduate study because I want to return to France, and because I see your program as the most thoroughgoing and creative curriculum available to prepare students for a lifetime of service in the public arena. I lived in France for one semester as an exchange student and this helped me to bring my French up to a professional level and to maintain it since. This is another reason why I am convinced that I can excel in your program.

The Challenges and Opportunities for Women in Management.