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DNP CRNA, Nurse Anesthesia, Nigerian

I moved from our native Nigeria to Nashville Tennessee when I was 8 years old. Now, 26 and a very hard working, licensed FNP. I hope to be selected to your competitive Nurse Anesthesia program in part on the basis of the fact that I have earned a 3.9 GPA during my graduate studies so far, in additio…

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Master’s Speech Pathology and Audiology, Musician

The distinguished Speech Pathology and Audiology Program at XXXX College is my first choice for graduate school to earn my Master’s Degree because I live close by – in addition to the fact that your program is well known for the extremely high quality of your clinical training Coming from my native …

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Endeavour Scholarship Australia, Filipina


Please summarise, in words that can be understood by a person outside your field, details of the proposed programme, why you chose your proposed host organization and what your proposed programme is intended to achieve. Also provide details including proposed dates and locations of any proposed fi…

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CRNA, Critical Care, Surgical, Indian

The University of XXXX is my first choice for graduate study in preparation for becoming a CRNA most of all because of your simply outstanding reputation on a global level. I crave the sheer academic rigor of one of the world’s finest Nurse Anesthesia programs, the prestige earned through a lot of d…

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Orthodontics Residency, Indian Woman Dentist

A young woman and a dentist from India who has been making a new home in America for the past several years, I am now working towards completion of my DDS Degree at XXXX University and hope to build a special career in Orthodontics as a result of being accepted to and completing your competitive Ort…

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MBA, Accounting Background, Saudi Woman

The world of business in my home country, Saudi Arabia, is dominated by males.  However, I have met several successful Saudi businesswomen whom I have admired and have a strong desire to emulate them by making my own mark in a masculine dominated business environment. I wish to acquire the skills an…

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MSC Clinical Microbiology, London, Turkish

I hold an undergraduate degree in Biology and a Master’s Degree in Toxicology from my native Turkey and I have now been living in London for more than a year. My central interest is public health from a chemical perspective – Clinical Microbiology.

I have been falling very much in love this p…

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MSW Afro-Latino, Latin America

The Masters in Social Work Program at the University of XXXX is my first choice for a variety of reasons. Your College of Social Work is well known for its national and international leadership in social work education and I appreciate how it is ranked among the top programs in the South. Originally…

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Master's Degree Occupational Therapy, Pakistani

I was awarded a B.Sc. (Occupational Therapy) by the School of Occupational Therapy of the Jinnah Post-Graduate Medical Centre, Karachi Pakistan in 2000. I graduated top of my class. The School and its curriculum are approved by the World Federation of Occupational Therapists. I have also been given …

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MA Global Communication, Marketing, Latina

There is a quotation relating to communication that, I believe, provides a vital lesson to everyone who wants their words to make a difference in the world – “Wise men speak because they have something to say; fools because they have to say something” – Plato.

My entire working life of 18…

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MS in Business Analytics, Mgmt., Programming

I am a very hard-working student and professional with a heightened sense of ethics and responsibility to both the company that I work for and the communities that we serve. I have always had a special passion for both Mathematics and Business, as a child, adolescent, and now a young adult.  The pri…

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MPH Public Oral Health, Indian-American

My GPA was not quite competitive enough to get me accepted to dental school. Thus, I need to improve my academic credentials if I am to realize my dream of spending the future as a humanitarian dentist provider with a special focus on the Developing World. I feel strongly that earning the MPH Degree…

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Masters, Information Systems, Chinese

A young woman in China who is very much in love with the USA, I hope very much to compliment my undergraduate education in America with a graduate education at XXXX University in Boston. Among all of my many favourite places in America, downtown Boston stands head and shoulders above the rest becaus…

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MSC Public Health, Nutrition UK

Having finally won a long personal battle to lose weight and to maintain the loss, I decided to study Clinical Nutrition in order to assist others dealing with the same issue. During my studies, voluntary activities and subsequent work, I became increasingly aware of the wide and growing incidence o…

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MPH Epidemiology, Latino, Sports Medicine

The Master of Public Health in Applied Epidemiology at XXXX University is my first choice for graduate school for a variety of reasons ranging from what is for me your ideal location to the very thoroughgoing nature of your program. I appreciate the enormous and diverse experience of your faculty, e…

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MS Project Management, Oil & Gas, Iranian

A young Iranian man who completed my undergraduate studies here in Iran, I earned my first Master’s Degree in England, the MSc in Advanced Chemical Process Design at the University of XXXX in 2009. Since that time, I have lived and worked in Tehran as a Senior Process Engineer and I now I have more …

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MA Psychological Counseling, NYC, Chinese

As a Chinese woman, an international student, and a Psychology major at XXU, I have been especially intrigued by the fact that I have witnessed several of my Asian friends and acquaintances suffering from depression and/or anxiety. I look forward to continuing to explore how Asian immigrant populati…

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Foreign Trained Dentist, Research Assistant, India

My childhood inquisitiveness was legendary within my family. I was curious about everything and conversations with my parents often began with a ‘why’, prompting yet another smiling sigh but I would persist. When my toothless grandmother came home one day with a mouth full of teeth, I was astonished…

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PHD Environmental Sciences, Canada

Born and raised in my native Iran, I came to Canada as a young adult and made Toronto my permanent home. Now a citizen of Canada, I hope very much to be accepted to your distinguished PHD Program in Environmental Sciences at the University of XXXX because it is one of the finest programs in the worl…

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OT Masters, African-American, Haitian

Now that I have extensive professional experience giving my all as a Certified Occupational Therapist Assistant (COTA), I feel strongly that I am well prepared to excel in graduate school in Occupational Therapy. By advancing my education in this area, I will gain the knowledge, perspective, exposur…

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