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MPH, Oral Pathology, Microbiology, Indian

I hope to earn a second Master’s at XXXX in Public Health so as to attain the finest education possible in this area. A dentist from India who is now making California her permanent home, earning my MDS in Dental Surgery in my country of origin, after completing dental school, will help me to excel …

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International Affairs Masters, Diplomacy, Africa

I feel strongly that I am a solid candidate for the Thomas R. Pickering Fellowship because of my potential to contribute to the Foreign Service after completing the Master’s Degree in International Affairs with a focus on Conflict Resolution. An African man raised in Africa, I look forward to return…

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Masters Communications Management, Taiwanese

My second internship, in particular, was influential in the development of my professional vision and my hope to earn the Master’s Degree in Communications Management at UXX because it was in the area of market influence, a relatively new trend in the communication world and the area in which I thin…

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SLP Masters, Audiology, Autistic Children

As a Registered Behavior Technician, since January of 2015, I have been working at Verbal Behavior XXXX with children on the Autism spectrum, providing behavior intervention and building language acquisition at home and at school. I have fallen deeply in love with SLP, Audiology, and mostly Autistic…

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SLP Master’s, Mexicana, Mother, Homemaker

From the experience that I have acquired to date, working as a SPLA since 2012, it is clear to me that it takes a very special type of person to treat speech disorders successfully; that empathy, determination and enormous patience, substantial technical knowledge and skills are called for in order …

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Master’s SLP, Children, Vietnamese

My fascination with language and communication stems from childhood experiences and observations. Our family had moved from Vietnam to Australia before I was born. As I grew up, I watched my mother struggle to acquire fluency in English. She succeeded but it was a long, hard journey complicated by t…

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Letter of Appeal, International Dentist Program

A dentist from India, a woman and most of all a mother, I was six months pregnant with my daughter when I learned that I was accepted to the dental program at XXXX. While I was elated, it turned out to be disastrous timing. My pregnancy had been very complicated and I began dental school fearing tha…

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Masters Material Science, Pollution, Chinese

I like to think of myself as a humanitarian as well as a scientist. Thus, as a Chinese man born and raised in China, my interest in and passion for research in the area of Materials Science has been born from and sustained by the social and environmental issues and challenges facing my country and p…

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Masters Food Science, Development, African

I hold a bachelor degree in Food Science from XXXX University and have 5 years’ experience in product development, food technology and research.   My goal in pursuing a Master’s degree at XXU is to acquire the high-level skills and knowledge which will enable me to assist in providing effective solu…

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DNP CRNA, Nurse Anesthesia, Nigerian

I moved from our native Nigeria to Nashville Tennessee when I was 8 years old. Now, 26 and a very hard working, licensed FNP. I hope to be selected to your competitive Nurse Anesthesia program in part on the basis of the fact that I have earned a 3.9 GPA during my graduate studies so far, in additio…

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Master’s Speech Pathology and Audiology, Musician

The distinguished Speech Pathology and Audiology Program at XXXX College is my first choice for graduate school to earn my Master’s Degree because I live close by – in addition to the fact that your program is well known for the extremely high quality of your clinical training Coming from my native …

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Endeavour Scholarship Australia, Filipina


Please summarise, in words that can be understood by a person outside your field, details of the proposed programme, why you chose your proposed host organization and what your proposed programme is intended to achieve. Also provide details including proposed dates and locations of any proposed fi…

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CRNA, Critical Care, Surgical, Indian

The University of XXXX is my first choice for graduate study in preparation for becoming a CRNA most of all because of your simply outstanding reputation on a global level. I crave the sheer academic rigor of one of the world’s finest Nurse Anesthesia programs, the prestige earned through a lot of d…

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Orthodontics Residency, Indian Woman Dentist

A young woman and a dentist from India who has been making a new home in America for the past several years, I am now working towards completion of my DDS Degree at XXXX University and hope to build a special career in Orthodontics as a result of being accepted to and completing your competitive Ort…

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MBA, Accounting Background, Saudi Woman

The world of business in my home country, Saudi Arabia, is dominated by males.  However, I have met several successful Saudi businesswomen whom I have admired and have a strong desire to emulate them by making my own mark in a masculine dominated business environment. I wish to acquire the skills an…

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MSC Clinical Microbiology, London, Turkish

I hold an undergraduate degree in Biology and a Master’s Degree in Toxicology from my native Turkey and I have now been living in London for more than a year. My central interest is public health from a chemical perspective – Clinical Microbiology.

I have been falling very much in love this p…

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MSW Afro-Latino, Latin America

The Masters in Social Work Program at the University of XXXX is my first choice for a variety of reasons. Your College of Social Work is well known for its national and international leadership in social work education and I appreciate how it is ranked among the top programs in the South. Originally…

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Master's Degree Occupational Therapy, Pakistani

I was awarded a B.Sc. (Occupational Therapy) by the School of Occupational Therapy of the Jinnah Post-Graduate Medical Centre, Karachi Pakistan in 2000. I graduated top of my class. The School and its curriculum are approved by the World Federation of Occupational Therapists. I have also been given …

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MA Global Communication, Marketing, Latina

There is a quotation relating to communication that, I believe, provides a vital lesson to everyone who wants their words to make a difference in the world – “Wise men speak because they have something to say; fools because they have to say something” – Plato.

My entire working life of 18…

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MS in Business Analytics, Mgmt., Programming

I am a very hard-working student and professional with a heightened sense of ethics and responsibility to both the company that I work for and the communities that we serve. I have always had a special passion for both Mathematics and Business, as a child, adolescent, and now a young adult.  The pri…

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