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Orthodontics Residency, Dentist from Iran

 

I qualified as a dentist in May 2014 and have worked as a general dentist since October of that year in California. I have long had an interest in orthodontics arising from the experiences of a family member. My brother suffered a severe malocclusion as a child and was teased and laughed a…

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MA Cognitive-Behavioral Therapy (CBT)

I feel strongly that I am an especially good fit for your MA Program in Counseling Psychology at XXXX College primarily because of the thoroughgoing nature and the widely recognized quality of your program, as one of the best in the Northeastern USA. This is especially true with respect to Cogni…

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PHD IT, Pathologist Assistant Faculty

Now 38 years old, I have been living in the USA for the second half of my life, leaving my native Portugal and coming to America alone at the age of 19 in search of adventure, career, human growth and experience, etc; I decided to stay and make it my home. Speaking very little English when I fir…

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MA Counseling, Alcoholic Father, Suicide Mother

I am applying to your distinguished Rehabilitation and Mental Health Counseling Program at the University of XXXX because I wish to devote the balance of my life to helping people to heal from the wounds of trauma and abuse, especially with respect to childhood. Now 45 years old, for the past 4 year…

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MA Political Science, European, African Woman

Your highly distinguished MA Program in Political Science at the XXXX European University if my first choice for graduate school because of the very progressive and creative nature of both your Political Science faculty and the university as a whole. An African woman who now lives in Denmark, I want…

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PHD Epidemiology Public Health LOR

To Whom It May Concern,

My name is XXXX MD and I am writing this letter on behalf of my studentXXXX, who is applying to your distinguished PHD Program in Epidemiology at the University of XXXX. I could not recommend XXXX more highly and I am most certain that with her vast experience, prowess, en…

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MS Healthcare Management, Homeopathic Doctor

I am a homeopathic physician from India who is building a new home here in America. Over the course of the last several years, I have found myself increasingly attracted to the business aspects of health care, issues of access and efficiency, and how to make health care more affordable as well as mo…

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Real Estate Masters, International Development

I am writing on behalf of my application to your distinguished Masters in Professional Studies in Real Estate Program at XXXX with a concentration in the area of International Development. A very hard working young man whose parents immigrated to America from Nigeria, I am currently enrolled in an M…

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Low GPA, Special Consideration Letter for Admission to Graduate School

Black football players are not famous for getting good grades. In what follows I ask for special consideration in this regard.

I ask for special consideration with respect to my abysmal showing as an undergraduate student, earning an undergraduate GPA of 2.6. These days, going to school is a comp…

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GRE Waiver Personal Letter of Appeal

I write the following in support of my request that the GRE examination be waived as a requisite for my entry into your Master’s in Health Administration Program at the University of XXXX. I ask you to please take into account the many years of experience that I now have in medicine, management, and…

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HRM, Bilingual, Bicultural, Dominican Woman

Your distinguished Masters of Science in Human Resource Management Program through the School of Professional Development at XXXX University is my first choice for graduate school and I feel that I am the best fit for your program for several reasons, most of all the sheer excellence of your curricu…

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Library Director Employment Application Statement

My philosophy is that a great library director should be someone who knows their community well and is very active in their community. Library directors also need to be great managers of people. The library director should be someone who is dedicated to lifelong education and has demonstrated his or…

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Masters Physician Assistant Studies, Indian

I don’t remember the exact moment when I fell in love with my profession. It was more of a gradual process beginning in high school and brought to reality when I was accepted by the best Ayurvedic college of India.  I also became especially highly motivated to study medicine and become a clinician s…

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Masters Real Estate, Finance, Bangladeshi

‘What am I trying to do and why?’ This is the question that all professionals of any type ought to have inscribed on their bathroom mirror and on the walls of their offices. All professionals face temptations to ‘wander off the track’ for various reasons such as self-indulgence, concentrating on pro…

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MA TESOL, Business Major, Pakistani


Now that I am close to finishing up my double major in Business and Accounting, I want very much to pursue a Masters in TESOL. Having learned ESL as a child, I find a great deal of personal satisfaction helping others to reach their fullest potential in English and I have a great passion for TESOL…

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MPA, Women’s Issues, Foreign Service, Filipina


A woman originally from the Philippines who is very immersed in women’s issues, especially with respect to the development and empowerment of women in the Developing World, I am now working towards the completion of my MPA Degree at XXXX University and currently working for local government. I off…

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MSN-PMHNP Psychiatric and Mental Health


In April 2006 I decided I to drop out of high school in order to escape from a troubled home and inner-city neighborhood. All I sought was a safe environment, to learn a trade, and I planed even before quitting school to get my GED as soon as possible and go to college. Soon, I enrolled in a gover…

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Orthodontics Residency, Masters, Syrian


I grew up in Damascus, Syria but I have been practicing general dentistry here in America since I earned my DMD Degree at the University of XXXX in 1998. Following a general practice residency at the University of XXXX from July of 1998 through June of 1999, I completed a fellowship position in imp…

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MSN Latina, Puerto Rico, Spanish


Probably the most unique aspect of my application to your distinguished MSN Degree Program at XXXX University is the fact that I went to nursing school in Puerto Rico, which included several semesters on neighboring St. Kitts Island. A Latina, Spanish was my first language but it became largely re…

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MSN Nurse Anesthesia, Indian Raised in Africa


An Indian woman who was born and raised in Tanzania, I already think of America as my home and country since I settled in California more than a decade ago. Now 30, almost since my arrival at 19, I have dreamed of becoming a nurse. To become a CRNA, in particular, has always been my central career…

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