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Masters Real Estate, Finance, Bangladeshi

March 31, 2017

‘What am I trying to do and why?’ This is the question that all professionals of any type ought to have inscribed on their bathroom mirror and on the walls of their offices. All professionals face temptations to ‘wander off the track’ for various reasons such as self-indulgence, concentrating on pro…

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MA TESOL, Business Major, Pakistani

December 6, 2016


Now that I am close to finishing up my double major in Business and Accounting, I want very much to pursue a Masters in TESOL. Having learned ESL as a child, I find a great deal of personal satisfaction helping others to reach their fullest potential in English and I have a great passion for TESOL…

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MPA, Women’s Issues, Foreign Service, Filipina

December 5, 2016


A woman originally from the Philippines who is very immersed in women’s issues, especially with respect to the development and empowerment of women in the Developing World, I am now working towards the completion of my MPA Degree at XXXX University and currently working for local government. I off…

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MSN-PMHNP Psychiatric and Mental Health

December 5, 2016


In April 2006 I decided I to drop out of high school in order to escape from a troubled home and inner-city neighborhood. All I sought was a safe environment, to learn a trade, and I planed even before quitting school to get my GED as soon as possible and go to college. Soon, I enrolled in a gover…

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Orthodontics Residency, Masters, Syrian

November 24, 2016


I grew up in Damascus, Syria but I have been practicing general dentistry here in America since I earned my DMD Degree at the University of XXXX in 1998. Following a general practice residency at the University of XXXX from July of 1998 through June of 1999, I completed a fellowship position in imp…

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MSN Latina, Puerto Rico, Spanish

November 24, 2016


Probably the most unique aspect of my application to your distinguished MSN Degree Program at XXXX University is the fact that I went to nursing school in Puerto Rico, which included several semesters on neighboring St. Kitts Island. A Latina, Spanish was my first language but it became largely re…

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MSN Nurse Anesthesia, Indian Raised in Africa

November 24, 2016


An Indian woman who was born and raised in Tanzania, I already think of America as my home and country since I settled in California more than a decade ago. Now 30, almost since my arrival at 19, I have dreamed of becoming a nurse. To become a CRNA, in particular, has always been my central career…

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Master’s Degree in Information Systems

October 13, 2016


I am an organized person. I am the one friends come to for advice on how to organize, say, moving house or a class reunion. I have a natural ability to recognize the necessary steps, records, resources and potential pitfalls in a situation to see everything through to a successful conclusion. Ever…

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Personal Statement for CASPA, Nigerian

July 30, 2016


Now a United States citizen, I came to America from my native Nigeria eleven years ago, at the age of 24. Now 35, I am finally getting close to achieving my dreams of assuming critically important levels of responsibility in our health care system working in the support of physicians.  I hope to b…

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MA Translation, Farsi, German, French, Spanish

July 30, 2016


I very much hope to be accepted to your distinguished Online Translation Program at the University of XXXX primarily as a result of my admiration for the rigorous, cutting-edge nature of your curriculum. Studying for my Masters Degree online will enable me to continue my professional employment as…

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Internship Health Care Administration, Latino

July 1, 2016


I already hold a good degree in general Business Management and am currently pursuing an MBA in Health Care Administration. As you will note, my career to date has been spent in the area of Neurodiagnostic Technology. However because of my successful work in that area, I have for some time been in…

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MPH Master’s Public Health, Saudi Arabian

June 29, 2016


My country, Saudi Arabia, is very wealthy however it still suffers a shortage of highly qualified specialist physicians in many areas. Although advanced in most areas of general healthcare provision, research in the area of public health services is not so well advanced in comparison with those of…

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Scholarship Essay for Masters in Nursing, Saudi

June 17, 2016


I feel strongly that we need to have more native nurses as well as doctors in my country, Saudi Arabia, rather than depending to such a vast extent on the importation of nurses and doctors from abroad. Thus, I also feel strongly that we need more Saudi Nurse Practitioners and it pleases me greatly…

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MS Education, Learning & Development, Latina

June 16, 2016


My whole working life of nearly 10 years has been spent in the field of training and I have enjoyed (almost) every day of it. Effectively and efficiently imparting information, knowledge and skills to employees for the benefit of the company is, of course, the basis of the trainer’s role. However,…

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Fulbright Scholarship, MPH, Pakistani Doctor

June 16, 2016


A doctor in Pakistan, I hope to be selected for the Fulbright Scholarship on the basis of my passionate to desire to earn the MPH Degree so that I can contribute to improving health care infrastructure in my native Pakistan in both the short and the long term. I am already cultivating a special in…

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Masters Speech Language Pathology, Children

June 16, 2016


My nephew, Carson, just celebrated his 9th birthday and he is one of the coolest and smartest kids I know.  However, he suffers a speech impediment which hinders the rest of the world (namely his school mates), from seeing just how great of a boy he truly is and it is an awareness of his distress …

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Master's Degree Health Informatics

June 16, 2016


Why have you decided to pursue a career in health informatics? How will this program help you to achieve your goals?

I want to better understand healthcare technology because, in addition to my family, it is my foremost passion in life. I work for a company that is becoming a major player in th…

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MPH Degree, Dentist, Saudi Arabia

June 15, 2016


A dentist from Saudi Arabia, now 28 years old, I completed dental School in my country in 2011 which was followed by a one-year internship at the dental clinic of the College of Dentistry at XXXX University, from which I graduated and where I continue to be employed as a Demonstrator. I am also th…

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Masters Communications, Latina, the Voiceless

June 15, 2016


A people person and highly professional, I now have 20 plus years of experience working in the media resolving internal/external communication problems. More recently, my duties have focused on press relations. Fundamental to the strength of my application is that I am Latina; thus, some of my mos…

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MS Real Estate Investment, Dubai, World Travel

June 15, 2016


Kansas City, Missouri, USA is my home base and for the past 7 years I have been buying and selling properties on my own. Real Estate investment is my favorite subject and the area to which I devote the most time reading and learning; thus, I am writing on behalf of my application to your distinguis…

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