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M.Eng. Information Systems Security

April 5, 2016


I am 23, a young woman from Saudi Arabia. Mature for my age, and hard working, I love everything having to do with technology, particularly communications and computer science. This is why I choose to study information security. My country, Saudi Arabia, is better developed than most Middle East c…

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Residency Internal Medicine/Pediatrics, Indian

May 13, 2015

I am a well qualified physician and have significant experience in practicing general medicine in India together with substantial recent exposure to the US medical environment. I now feel ready to undertake a residency in Internal Medicine and Pediatrics in a challenging but supportive environment.

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M.Ed. Degree in Special Education, Disabilities

November 3, 2014


Two factors, in particular, account for my profound passion for professional growth in the area of special education and my decision to apply to your program. Foremost among these significant factors was the fact that I too was once in special education classes to overcome my disability to perform…

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Master’s Computer Science, Data Mining, Saudi

November 3, 2014

From my earliest years I loved puzzles and games involving the application of logic. It was a delight, at school, to discover that my skills had an application in computing. From my first lesson in the subject, I was ‘hooked’, it was work but it was also fun, an elusive combination to many in the wo…

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Ph.D. Computer Science, Networks, Saudi

October 30, 2014

“Why do you want to do this?” People have said to me, in the tone one might use to a person threatening to jump from a cliff!  So I very carefully considered my motives before making this application. My reasons are: I love challenges and solving problems; I want to achieve something significant; I …

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International Affairs/Public Policy, Military

October 20, 2014

As a child, I loved maps. This interest developed into a curiosity about the differences and similarities in the way people in these different places on the map lived, ate, spoke and earned their livelihoods. This awareness of the world and its variety has increased with time and with the substantia…

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MA Master's Child Study and Education

April 19, 2014

My decision to pursue a Master’s degree in this discipline results from a deeply felt desire to make a positive difference in the lives of children. I believe that the substantial child related voluntary activities that I have undertaken together with the success that I have enjoyed in my undergradu…

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Sample Undergraduate Admission Bachelors

April 19, 2014

Ever since I started high school, I knew XXU was where I wanted to dedicate my undergraduate study.  I haunted my guidance counselor’s office every day freshman year, poring over information on the University.  XXU is first in so many ways, from its status as the largest non-profit private universit…

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Disadvantaged Status Essay, Dental, Africa

April 19, 2014

Leaving Tanzania with my parents and sister was meant to better our lives. My father, a professional accountant, and my wonderful mom, with a pocketful of hopes and dreams, came to Canada to begin a new life. I was a teen, felt ready for anything, and confident in my family.

I remember when it fi…

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WHNP Women’s Health Nurse Practitioner

March 9, 2014

I had a really good time in nursing school in general; but nothing else excited me as much as my course in women’s health. This is why I have my sights set on becoming a distinguished WHNP and I hope to perform all of my clinical work in this area. I have complete confidence in the distinguished fac…

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Masters IR, French Canadian

November 26, 2013

I am a Canadian woman of French heritage and I am currently based in Paris at the Canadian Embassy and living in Toronto at the moment as part of a three month mission. I speak and write fluent English, French, Spanish and Italian. I am learning Russian and can speak the language. I intend to commen…

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Orthodontics Masters, Saudi Arabian Applicant

November 19, 2013

The XXXX School is my first choice for study towards the Master’s Degree in Orthodontics for a variety of reasons. I particularly appreciate the way in which your program has such a broad range of offerings in terms of clinical training possibilities. I am convinced that there is a symbiotic relatio…

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LLM, Human Rights, Immigrant Advocacy

May 5, 2013

My studies of law and recent experience in community work have fired a desire to expand my knowledge at a master level. I hold a B.A. degree in law from a University in the Dominican Republic and a B.A. in International Criminal Justice ‘summa cum laude’ awarded by John Jay College. My goal is to pr…

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MA, MFT Family Therapy, Community

April 11, 2013

I am an Egyptian, born and raised in Kuwait until the age of sixteen. I now live in California. I hold a Bachelor’s degree in Psychology and Social Behavior from the University of XXXX. I speak Arabic and English. My goal is to become a counselor specializing in the problems suffered by immigrant fa…

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MA Counseling Psychology LGBT, Gay

April 11, 2013

As a psychology professional, I wish to specialize in both the short and long terms in the area of community mental health. I look forward to a long and highly productive career helping a wide range of individuals in my community to realize their fullest potential, finding happiness in life through …

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MA Clinical Psychology, Muslim Psychiatric Issues, Saudi

April 11, 2013

I am on a fully paid scholarship program from my government, the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia, to study Psychology abroad. I want to earn my masters degree in clinical psychology so that I can then return to  my country and being working in my field. First I will work for a hospital for at least a couple…

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MS, Supply Chain Management, Transportation

January 23, 2013

For almost a decade, I have maintained a conceptual continuity in my education, volunteerism and career, an unswerving path to the highest level of education possible in TL.  Giving my time, energy, and all that I am to my work in logistics (transportation) and supply chain management, I have only b…

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Masters Educational Counseling, HR Background

January 22, 2013

For the past three years, I have been away from my true calling.  When I first entered higher education, my initial aim was to enter the field of counseling in an educational capacity.  Earning my graduate HR degree was a decision based on a belief that it would be a natural and logical progression …

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Masters Translation, UK Distance Learning

January 22, 2013

My homeland of Switzerland is a country of many languages with many differing dialects of multiple origins. Growing up, traveling, being educated, working and conducting research in incredibly culturally diverse places, I have been fortunate enough to learn and be conversant, read and write in three…

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MBA Business & Economics

January 22, 2013

The spirit and vision that has guided my family for over two hundred years in the US has created educators, innovators, pioneers, entrepreneurs and US patriots, a rich heritage that I am truly proud of and am eager to contribute to through my own unique abilities and aptitudes.  Increasing my exposu…

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