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Sample 1st Paragraph Personal Statement, CARMS, ERAS, Fellowship Position in Endocrinology

I have a great passion for medicine and extensive clinical experience that would make me an asset to your team if I were to be selected for a fellowship position in Endocrinology. Originally from Colombia where I completed medical school, I am now about to begin the third year of my residency program in Internal Medicine here in the USA. I am especially well versed and experienced in the treatment of metabolic diseases and I find a great deal of satisfaction helping sick people, especially the elderly.

Statements of Excellence for Medical Residency & Felllowship Positions

I help applicants to residency and fellowship programs from all over the world. I would be honored to draft a model first paragraph for your Statement at no obligation in order to promote my service. I especially enjoy working on behalf of those clients whose stated long term goals represent a significant contribution to the progressive enrichment of humanity, particularly with respect to the Developing World.

I have long cultivated a special interest in the study of what makes a medical residency statement especially effective and I am personally do all of the writing and final revisions of statements for all of my clients. I take great delight at making certain that each client is happy with my product and I always feel proud of the material that I have prepared on your behalf.  I will make your unique ethnic and national heritage central to your story weaving it throughout the essay in a highly eloquent fashion that will give you the greatest chance of being awarded an interview for a residency position. Many of my clients are convinced that they would not have been invited for an interview if it were not for the excellence of their personal statement.

As a specialist in the area of diversity, I find particular joy in helping to foster the representation of all ethnicities in our medical institutions. I think it is not only healthy for America to have a medical staff that was born all over the world, but it is also healthy for the planet. For over a decade, I have helped thousands of residents struggling to write their own statement in English as a second or foreign language, something that can be enormously difficult. Please let me help! You need a very well written, eloquent statement in order to be accepted. Much of your competition uses professional help, which gives them an edge. It would be prudent for you to get help as well.

I am committed to providing the highest possible quality of service to all applicants who turn to me for support, direction, and/or assistance. No matter where you come from on the globe, I struggle 7 days a week to provide you with the assistance that you need to produce an extremely effective and eloquent essay that maximizes your chances of being chosen for a medial residency or fellowship position in an English speaking country. I usually help several people a day, and it would be an honor for me to help you as well.

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