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Entry Level MSN Program, Public Health, FNP

Why XXXX University: I want very much to become a nurse and to build my career in nursing; yet, my undergraduate degree is in Public Health, a closely related field that, in fact,  has served to inspire me to a career in nursing. My current internship as a Nurse’s Assistant has also served to make m…

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DNP Studies, Psychiatric, Crisis Intervention

My goal for DNP studies at XXXX University is to be the finest DNP possible. I am currently serving as an RN on a psychiatric unit working with patients in acute crisis. Raised in a family of humanistic and holistic healers, the daughter of a nurse educator, and the sister of a nurse midwife—my fath…

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DNP-NA Nursing Practice, Nurse Anesthesia

Having completed an undergraduate degree in Flute Performance, I like to think that my background in music has helped me to cultivate creativity, dedication, perseverance, and to learn to prioritize at an early age—all qualities that have been instrumental so far to my success in nursing. Adaptable,…

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PA Masters Applicant, Chiropractor USA

I am very keen on outdoor pursuits especially hunting and fishing and, consequently, spend much of my spare time in rural Nevada pursuing these interests. I have come to love the wilder parts of Nevada and the local people who have an interesting view of life and a neighborliness that is heart-warmi…

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EDD Degree in Educational Admin., Mixed Race

I am an educational administrator who wants very much to attain the terminal degree in my field so as to be able to make the fullest contribution possible towards educational reform, the ongoing improvement and implementation of progressive educational policies, especially in my home state of Virgin…

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Pediatrics Residency, Developing World, Saudi

I was born in Seattle, Washington and spent my early years among the magnificent towering pine trees of the Pacific Northwest.  Seattle is the best of both worlds; a thriving metropolis surrounded by the natural beauty of green forests.

 I come from a family of academic achievers.  My father ear…

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Sample Undergraduate Admission Bachelors

Ever since I started high school, I knew XXU was where I wanted to dedicate my undergraduate study.  I haunted my guidance counselor’s office every day freshman year, poring over information on the University.  XXU is first in so many ways, from its status as the largest non-profit private universit…

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CRNA Masters, Korean-American, Army

I feel that one of the greatest benefits of being a professional nurse is the gratification that comes from easing the suffering of others. I have focused on anesthesia because I want to devote the balance of my professional life to this cause. I am a US Army Captain and serving my country is my fir…

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MSN, Post-Surgery, Vietnamese-American

After graduating from XXXX State with my BSN in Nursing, I began my career with XXU Health on a floor that specializes in post surgical patients, especially those with traumatic injuries. I was nervous but very eager to learn. Taking care of patient’s physiological, psychological and spiritual needs…

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WHNP Women’s Health Nurse Practitioner

I had a really good time in nursing school in general; but nothing else excited me as much as my course in women’s health. This is why I have my sights set on becoming a distinguished WHNP and I hope to perform all of my clinical work in this area. I have complete confidence in the distinguished fac…

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ANP Adult Nurse Practitioner, Portuguese

I want to become a nurse practitioner because nursing is my life and I want to advance in my career, becoming the finest ANP possible. I do not spend much time on facebook; when I am there, it is usually to share experiences with other nurses. At least with the exception of my daughter, my top prior…

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MSN Masters, Military Nurse, Healthcare Mgmt

I am applying to your distinguished program at XXXX University because I see it as the best fit for my high level of motivation and extensive professional responsibility. I also feel strongly that my personal nursing philosophy is well aligned with the mission of your program with respect to diversi…

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MSN Online Nursing and Health Studies

XXXX University is my first choice for graduate study not only because it is the finest MSN program available online, but also because of your Jesuit philosophy and tradition of placing those who most need our help as our highest priority. There is nothing that I am as proud of as I am my 6 trips to…

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Masters PA, Indian Medical Doctor with MPH

Despite the fact that I was a practicing physician in my native India, and have successfully completed a Master’s Degree in Public Health here in the United States, I want very much to return to school again because I have become convinced that becoming a Physician Assistant is what I most want to d…

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MS Masters Program, Pathologist Assistant

When I first dissected a frog in the ninth grade, I was thrilled to witness the unseen elements that sustained a living creature. I felt intrigued about how the various organs worked and contributed to the robust health of the organism. I was keen to find the answers to questions in my biology class…

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PHD Measurement, Statistics, & Evaluation

No one values education more highly than those who have received little or none themselves. Such was the case with my parents, my father had attended school for only five years and my mother had never attended school and was unable to read and write. Thus, our parents were especially determined that…

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PA, Physician Assistant Masters, Biology Degree

I was born in New York and raised in Georgia. I am of Italian descent and speak English and Italian. I hold the Bachelor’s degree in Biology awarded by XXXX University in 2010. It is my goal to qualify and to work as a Physician’s Assistant and, in this way to make a meaningful contribution to socie…

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JD, Juris Doctor, Family Law, Canadian-Chinese

I am a Canadian-Chinese man, born in Hong Kong and raised in Canada from an early age. I currently live in Hong Kong. I speak English, Chinese and French. I hold a B.Sc. degree in Biochemistry awarded by McGill University. My goal is to qualify in the program and then to practise as a barrister in f…

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Masters OT, African American

I am an African American male, born in the Bahamas and raised in Fort Lauderdale where I currently live and work. I hold a Bachelor’s degree in Health Service Administration from Barry University. I speak English, Creole and French and have a working knowledge of Spanish.

 About six years ago, …

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MS, Master’s in Project Management, Chinese

I am Chinese, raised in Beijing and now living in Boston. I anticipate the award of the B.S. degree in Leadership from XXXX University in July of this year. My goal is to complete the M.S. degree in Project Management and ultimately to return to China to set up my own business. I believe that partic…

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