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Endeavour Scholarship Australia, Filipina

Please summarise, in words that can be understood by a person outside your field, details of the proposed programme, why you chose your proposed host organization and what your proposed programme is intended to achieve. Also provide details including proposed dates and locations of any proposed fi…

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GRE Waiver Personal Letter of Appeal

I write the following in support of my request that the GRE examination be waived as a requisite for my entry into your Master’s in Health Administration Program at the University of XXXX. I ask you to please take into account the many years of experience that I now have in medicine, management, and…

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MPH Degree, Dentist, Saudi Arabia

A dentist from Saudi Arabia, now 28 years old, I completed dental School in my country in 2011 which was followed by a one-year internship at the dental clinic of the College of Dentistry at XXXX University, from which I graduated and where I continue to be employed as a Demonstrator. I am also th…

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Masters IR & Political Science, Canadian, Turkey

I am a young man who is deeply engaged with Turkish politics and history because it is my homeland. The fact that I am just as much Canadian as I am Turkish, I hope, will prove to be an asset to my objectivity and learning to think and feel about issues close to the Turkish heart from a variety of…

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LOR, Masters Management & Statistics, Chinese #2


RE:  Applicant XXXX

Dear Admissions Committee Director:

I am writing on behalf of XXXX application to study towards the Master’s Degree in your competitive program in the areas of statistics and management. I have now been teaching Statistics at the XXXX University for 4 years. XXXX…

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Masters Supply Chain Management, Africa

I am applying to XXXX University’s Supply Chain Management Masters Program for many reasons, first and foremost of which is the highly developed specialization of your program in my area, Oil & Gas Development. I am originally from Tanzania and I see it as my home, my people, and it is for this re…

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Masters Physician Assistant Studies, Belize

I look forward to contributing to the diversity of your program as a young woman from Belize. Unlike most people from my country, I am fluent in Spanish as well as English, learning it as a child from my grandmother who did not speak much English. As a Spanish speaking woman of African descent, I …

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Medical School, French, Ethiopia

I am from Ethiopia, but also spent two-and-a-half years in a refugee camp in Kenya while growing up. My most fundamental respect for doctors is rooted in that experience long ago. Our camp was overcrowded with poor hygiene and many people died. It was in that camp that I began to pay attention to …

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