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Disadvantaged Status Essay, Dental, Yemen

From the time that I was 6 through 10, I lived in Yemen in an old house with no electricity. I read late into the night with an oil lamp. At least it was not as crowded as my home back in our Arab Ghetto of Dearborn, were 12 people were crammed into a 3 bedroom home. The most difficult part of growi…

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Disadvantaged Status Essay, Dental, Africa

Leaving Tanzania with my parents and sister was meant to better our lives. My father, a professional accountant, and my wonderful mom, with a pocketful of hopes and dreams, came to Canada to begin a new life. I was a teen, felt ready for anything, and confident in my family.

I remember when it fi…

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MD, Medical School Admission, Chinese

I have practiced the martial art of Muay Thai kickboxing for five years. The decision to do so has been among the best I have ever taken. I have had the great satisfaction of facing stronger opponents and prevailing in the contest through the application of greater determination, resilience and an a…

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MA Sociology, Latina, Mexican-American

I am from a Mexican American background born in Chicago and raised in Mexico and the U.S. I am bilingual in English and Spanish. I hold a Bachelor’s degree in Sociology awarded by the XXXX College. My goal is to assist members of the Hispanic community generally and particularly to help them to purs…

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Masters Counseling Psychology, Chinese

I am a Chinese woman born and raised in China, resident in the U.S. for two years. I speak Mandarin, Cantonese and English.  I hold a Bachelor’s degree in Business and an Associate’s degree in Social Sciences (major in Psychology). I expect to be awarded a further Associate’s degree in Child Develop…

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Scholarship Essay for Study in China

I am applying for the XXX Scholarship to study Mandarin language and chemistry at the XXXX University in Hong Kong. Since Hong Kong is now part of China—the principal gateway where East meets West meet in Asia—I will have the opportunity to learn a great deal about Chinese language, culture, society…

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Masters Financial Engineering, Chinese

I am a woman born and raised in China, now living in Ohio. I will be awarded a BS in Accounting in May and a BA in Mathematics and Statistics in July 2011. I speak Mandarin, Cantonese and English.

From the first class I ever took in Finance, I was fascinated. I was drawn by the magic that intangi…

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MS Engineering, Nanomanufacturing Hispanic

I am a young Latino man from El Salvador who wants very much to earn a Master’s Degree in Mechanical Engineering. I am especially interested in doing research in the areas of manufacturing processes, especially nanomanufacturing, design, supply chain development and management, and computer engineer…

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MPH Microbiology, Medical Parasitology Africa

It is with great enthusiasm that I apply for admission to study part time towards the MPH Degree in your highly esteemed program with a concentration in the area of global health.  I am currently a Research Associate in the Division of Geographic Medicine and Infectious Diseases at XXXX Medical Cent…

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MS SLP, Hispanic Applicant

A 21-year-old Latina, I was born in Chicago, Illinois but raised in Puerto Rico. I will graduate this coming May of 2011 from XXXX University in San Juan with an undergraduate degree in Speech Therapy. My mom is Colombian and my dad is from Puerto Rico and I am the eldest of two siblings—the first i…

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MS in Food Science, Saudi Food & Drug Authority

I am from Saudi Arabia and currently employed with the Saudi Food and Drug Authority. I have a full academic scholarship to study towards my PHD in America. I was raised in Riyadh and have a Bachelor’s Degree in Food Science from King Saud University. I am especially interested in doing research in …

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MA, Comparative and International Education

I am a 28 year old woman from Taiwan who is a great adventurer. I love to travel and my special love is education. Over the last 4 years I have visited 30 countries so far and I am still traveling. Since education is my first love and college is my life, I want to continue to go to school so that I …

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MS Degree in Bacteriology, Thai Applicant

I grew up surrounded by animals and nature, raised by my grandparents in a remote area of rural Thailand. I communed with nature from a very early age. Everything was alive to me. Thus, I chose to major in Biology upon entering XXXX University.

 While in college I worked at an aquarium and in thi…

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Masters Physician Assistant Program, Ukraine

I am writing for your consideration into the Masters Physician Assistant  Program at the XXXX campus of XXXX University. At 25, I feel that I now have sufficient maturity to fully appreciate your program. I am also finally in a position where I have economic security and could afford to pay for my s…

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MA Environmental Anthropology, Ecotourism

“To leave the world a little better, Whether by a healthy child, A garden patch, Or a redeemed social condition;….

To know even one life has breathed easier, Because you have lived… 
This is to have succeeded.”~Ralph Waldo Emerson

I graduated Magna Cum Laude with a Bachelor of Arts …

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Fellowship Healthcare Admin., Gerontology

When we speak of the Healthcare System in The United States it is often with a sense of resignation or futility. It is obvious to most of us that reform is urgently needed but that lasting solutions are complex and difficult to come by. Those of us who work in healthcare management are only too awar…

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