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Master’s Speech Pathology and Audiology, Musician

The distinguished Speech Pathology and Audiology Program at XXXX College is my first choice for graduate school to earn my Master’s Degree because I live close by – in addition to the fact that your program is well known for the extremely high quality of your clinical training Coming from my native …

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Fellowship IR, International Relations

The worth of a subject, among most of the people I know, is measured only in terms of its income-creating potential. My choice of History was met with incredulity, among family and friends who could see no way of capitalizing on knowledge of the past. Bright people are expected to study such subject…

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PA Masters Polish Speaker, Healthy Living

“Does anyone speak Polish?” The director of rehabilitation was concerned about a recently admitted Parkinson’s disease patient who was failing to take her medication and who was anxious and confused following her recent diagnosis and admission to the acute rehabilitation facility where I was a volun…

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Letter of Recommendation Medical Residency

DATE:

 Re: Dr. XXXX’s Recommendation Letter                                        

 Dear Program Director,

 Please accept this as a strong letter of recommendation in support of Dr XXXX’s scholastics and personal attributes. She is a recent gradu…

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Endocrinology Fellowship, Saudi Arabia

PURPOSE: The purpose behind my wanting to obtain a fellowship in endocrinology in the United States is to acquire the knowledge and training necessary to help raise the standard of treatment and patient care in my native country of Saudi Arabia. My country of origin is renowned for its oil fields an…

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CRNA, Nurse Anesthesia, Filipino & Chinese

 Born and raised in Manila, Philippines, I am a young man and a nurse who is three quarters Filipino and one quarter Chinese. One of four siblings, I grew up in a tiny, humble home in one of the most impoverished slums in Manila, far from the city lights. We were happy despite the fact that 15 peop…

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Masters Degree in Linguistics, UAE, Middle East

Since I was child, I have become increasingly aware of the fact that our capacity for acquiring knowledge is virtually endless—in fact exponential—the more I thirst the more I drink. Studying French was obligatory in my faculty and it provided an excellent foundation for my later mastery of Spanish …

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MBA Objective Statement, 300 words

I intend to utilize the skills that I will acquire in your MBA program primarily to greatly expand my own company. Your MBA program fits nicely with my career plan at this particular stage of the development of my business since I now have the time to develop much of my energy to study. I look forwa…

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HR Masters, Cultural Sensitivity

I do not have direct experience of HR work and so this application may be a little unusual. My fascination with HR has arisen and deepened through my associate and bachelor degree studies and through my own academic and professional experiences. I have become increasingly aware of the pivotal role p…

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LLM Masters UK, Caribbean Woman, Labour

I am applying for admission to your External Law Programme because I would very much like to attain the LLB Degree from a traditional, prestigious English Law Degree Programme with international standing. I hope to complete your Programme in three years, since I want to continue my work in the banki…

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LLM, Masters International Business, Trade Law

I am a Mexican attorney from Nogales, in fact, both Nogaleses, the one in Arizona as well as the one in Sonora, Mexico. I attended school in the US through the 6th grade, and since then we have went to the USA almost daily to shop, restaurants, movies, business. Thus, I feel that I have grown up squ…

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LLM, Human Rights, Immigrant Advocacy

My studies of law and recent experience in community work have fired a desire to expand my knowledge at a master level. I hold a B.A. degree in law from a University in the Dominican Republic and a B.A. in International Criminal Justice ‘summa cum laude’ awarded by John Jay College. My goal is to pr…

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MPA Degree Program Sample, Taiwan, Chinese

I have earned a great deal through maturity, the long process of finding deep inside myself a rich context of finely honed professional skills built upon solid experience. Graduate studies in public administration, for me, is the fruition of a long process of building my professional of interdiscipl…

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MSc, Accounting and Finance, UK, Arab

Still only 19, I am a young Egyptian woman who has always taken my studies very seriously and this is why I have always excelled. Although I was raised in Egypt, I now live in Norwich, UK where I am diligently preparing myself to enter your program. I have my heart set on studying at XXXX University…

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MA Clinical Psychology, Muslim Psychiatric Issues, Saudi

I am on a fully paid scholarship program from my government, the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia, to study Psychology abroad. I want to earn my masters degree in clinical psychology so that I can then return to  my country and being working in my field. First I will work for a hospital for at least a couple…

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MS, Masters in Finance, Africa, Australia

Born and raised until the age of 15 in Ethiopia, I am a young man who will always have Africa in his heart, despite the fact that I have now lived for 17 years in the USA. Eventually, I want to return to Ethiopia and work towards African economic development thorough greater participation in the int…

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MSW, Social Work Masters, Haiti

With wisdom comes timing, a knowledge of the right moment when to act. It has always been my desire to make a difference to the lives of others. I believe that my experiences thus far have brought me to the pivotal point of making this dream a reality.  By enrolling in a Masters program in Social Wo…

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MSW Child & Family Therapy, LCSW

Perhaps what I am most proud of life is my long trajectory of helping others. This is why at mid-life, 50, I can now afford the luxury of my true love and devote myself to full time social work. Even though I have already been actively engaged in my calling since May of 2008, working as a Family Inv…

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MS, Masters Real Estate Development

Upon graduation, my aim is to continue a similar, yet enhanced path I began over ten years ago when I first set out to own and operate my own independent real estate development company.  Any developer wants to be the best performer in their field, and yet, I have grown to know that there is somethi…

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MA, MFT Marriage Counseling, Iranian

Earning my Biology degree and Psychology minor from UXX has had significant repercussions in my life that I never foresaw, events that have placed my feet irrevocably on the path of Psychology and particularly Marriage and Family Counseling.  Indeed, my academic foundation in Psychology not only aid…

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