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Masters, Information Systems, Chinese

December 26, 2017

A young woman in China who is very much in love with the USA, I hope very much to compliment my undergraduate education in America with a graduate education at XXXX University in Boston. Among all of my many favourite places in America, downtown Boston stands head and shoulders above the rest becaus…

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Low GPA, Special Consideration Letter for Admission to Graduate School

April 12, 2017

Black football players are not famous for getting good grades. In what follows I ask for special consideration in this regard.

I ask for special consideration with respect to my abysmal showing as an undergraduate student, earning an undergraduate GPA of 2.6. These days, going to school is a comp…

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Executive MPA Global Public Affairs

April 5, 2016


At 34, I have had the opportunity to see what have become for me some of the most critical parts of the world. My experience working at Haiti’s XXXX Hospital for one month in September of 2012 stands center front among my formative experiences, just as does my visit the Palestinian territories the…

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Job Application Statement Medical Assistant, HRM

October 30, 2014

Much of my significant healthcare experience and background has been gained in some of the most challenging settings including my own troubled country of Liberia. I have necessarily had to demonstrate skills in planning, prioritizing, organization, self-reliance, originality, persistence and in maki…

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Medical Residency Internal Medicine, Venezuela

August 30, 2014

A wise mentor once taught me the secret behind internal medicine’s role as a specialty within medicine. Its non-surgical key to being a diagnostic discipline lies in expert history-taking and skilled patient examination. Simple, but true; this observation by a compassionate doctor from my native cit…

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MSN, Post-Surgery, Vietnamese-American

March 9, 2014

After graduating from XXXX State with my BSN in Nursing, I began my career with XXU Health on a floor that specializes in post surgical patients, especially those with traumatic injuries. I was nervous but very eager to learn. Taking care of patient’s physiological, psychological and spiritual needs…

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MPH Degree Program, Medical Doctor from Iraq

October 30, 2013

I am a 28-year-old medical doctor from Iraq who now lives in Houston, Texas. I want very much to attain a Masters Degree in Public Health to enhance my professional capacity and stature as a medical professional. XXU is my first choice for graduate study because it is the finest program of its kind …

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Sample Letter of Appeal for Graduate Admission

May 4, 2013

Letter of Appeal for Graduate Admissions, Graduate Public Health Program, University of XXXX, College of Public Health, Department of Environmental and Occupational Health.

 Respected Graduate Admissions Committee:

My application for admission to your program was declined and I would like to …

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