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MS Healthcare Management, Homeopathic Doctor

I am a homeopathic physician from India who is building a new home here in America. Over the course of the last several years, I have found myself increasingly attracted to the business aspects of health care, issues of access and efficiency, and how to make health care more affordable as well as mo…

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Real Estate, International Development, Nigerian

 I am writing on behalf of my application to your distinguished Masters in Professional Studies in Real Estate Program at XXXX with a concentration in the area of International Development. A very hard working young man whose parents immigrated to America from Nigeria, I am currently enrolled in an…

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Low GPA, Special Consideration for Admission

Black football players are not famous for getting good grades. In what follows I ask for special consideration in this regard.

I ask for special consideration with respect to my abysmal showing as an undergraduate student, earning an undergraduate GPA of 2.6. These days, going to school is a comp…

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GRE Waiver Personal Letter of Appeal

I write the following in support of my request that the GRE examination be waived as a requisite for my entry into your Master’s in Health Administration Program at the University of XXXX. I ask you to please take into account the many years of experience that I now have in medicine, management, and…

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HRM, Bilingual, Bicultural, Dominican Woman

Your distinguished Masters of Science in Human Resource Management Program through the School of Professional Development at XXXX University is my first choice for graduate school and I feel that I am the best fit for your program for several reasons, most of all the sheer excellence of your curricu…

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Library Director Employment Application Statement

My philosophy is that a great library director should be someone who knows their community well and is very active in their community. Library directors also need to be great managers of people. The library director should be someone who is dedicated to lifelong education and has demonstrated his or…

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Masters Physician Assistant Studies, Indian

I don’t remember the exact moment when I fell in love with my profession. It was more of a gradual process beginning in high school and brought to reality when I was accepted by the best Ayurvedic college of India.  I also became especially highly motivated to study medicine and become a clinician s…

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Masters Real Estate, Finance, Bangladeshi

‘What am I trying to do and why?’ This is the question that all professionals of any type ought to have inscribed on their bathroom mirror and on the walls of their offices. All professionals face temptations to ‘wander off the track’ for various reasons such as self-indulgence, concentrating on pro…

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MA TESOL, Business Major, Pakistani


Now that I am close to finishing up my double major in Business and Accounting, I want very much to pursue a Masters in TESOL. Having learned ESL as a child, I find a great deal of personal satisfaction helping others to reach their fullest potential in English and I have a great passion for TESOL …

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MPA, Women’s Issues, Foreign Service, Filipina


A woman originally from the Philippines who is very immersed in women’s issues, especially with respect to the development and empowerment of women in the Developing World, I am now working towards the completion of my MPA Degree at XXXX University and currently working for local government. I offe…

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MSN-PMHNP Psychiatric and Mental Health


In April 2006 I decided I to drop out of high school in order to escape from a troubled home and inner-city neighborhood. All I sought was a safe environment, to learn a trade, and I planed even before quitting school to get my GED as soon as possible and go to college. Soon, I enrolled in a govern…

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Orthodontics Residency, Masters, Syrian


I grew up in Damascus, Syria but I have been practicing general dentistry here in America since I earned my DMD Degree at the University of XXXX in 1998. Following a general practice residency at the University of XXXX from July of 1998 through June of 1999, I completed a fellowship position in imp…

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MSN Latina, Puerto Rico, Spanish


Probably the most unique aspect of my application to your distinguished MSN Degree Program at XXXX University is the fact that I went to nursing school in Puerto Rico, which included several semesters on neighboring St. Kitts Island. A Latina, Spanish was my first language but it became largely rep…

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Master's Degree in Data Base Management


I am an organized person. I am the one friends come to for advice on how to organize, say, moving house or a class reunion. I have a natural ability to recognize the necessary steps, records, resources and potential pitfalls in a situation to see everything through to a successful conclusion. Ever…

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Personal Statement for CASPA, Nigerian


Now a United States citizen, I came to America from my native Nigeria eleven years ago, at the age of 24. Now 35, I am finally getting close to achieving my dreams of assuming critically important levels of responsibility in our health care system working in the support of physicians.  I hope to be…

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MA Translation, Farsi, German, French, Spanish


I very much hope to be accepted to your distinguished Online Translation Program at the University of XXXX primarily as a result of my admiration for the rigorous, cutting-edge nature of your curriculum. Studying for my Masters Degree online will enable me to continue my professional employment as …

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Internship Health Care Administration, Latino


I already hold a good degree in general Business Management and am currently pursuing an MBA in Health Care Administration. As you will note, my career to date has been spent in the area of Neurodiagnostic Technology. However because of my successful work in that area, I have for some time been inv…

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MPH Master’s Public Health, Saudi Arabian


My country, Saudi Arabia, is very wealthy however it still suffers a shortage of highly qualified specialist physicians in many areas. Although advanced in most areas of general healthcare provision, research in the area of public health services is not so well advanced in comparison with those of …

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Scholarship Essay for Masters in Nursing, Saudi


I feel strongly that we need to have more native nurses as well as doctors in my country, Saudi Arabia, rather than depending to such a vast extent on the importation of nurses and doctors from abroad. Thus, I also feel strongly that we need more Saudi Nurse Practitioners and it pleases me greatly …

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MS Education, Learning & Development, Latina


My whole working life of nearly 10 years has been spent in the field of training and I have enjoyed (almost) every day of it. Effectively and efficiently imparting information, knowledge and skills to employees for the benefit of the company is, of course, the basis of the trainer’s role. However, …

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