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Orthodontics Masters, Saudi Arabian Applicant

November 19, 2013

The XXXX School is my first choice for study towards the Master’s Degree in Orthodontics for a variety of reasons. I particularly appreciate the way in which your program has such a broad range of offerings in terms of clinical training possibilities. I am convinced that there is a symbiotic relationship between the world-class quality of your program, on the one hand, and the singularly high level of culture and development of the greater San Francisco area on the other. No other program, in my humble opinion, could serve as a better springboard upon which to launch a distinguished career that will enable me to make major contributions to the advancement of Orthodontics in my home country, Saudi Arabia.

 I am also attracted to the fact that the XXXX School is recognized as one of the leading programs in the world and well known internationally. I also appreciate the fact that many of its course offerings are unique, as are many of the distinguished publication track records of your faculty. I am keenly excited about the prospect of studying under or working with as many of your faculty members as possible but I particularly look forward to learning from Dr. Marie Tolarova since the focus of much of her research aligns with my own research interests in the relationship between genetic etiology on the one hand, and orofacial clefts on the other. I want very much to devote my life to the identification of craniofacial anomalies in a search for preventive strategies. I am convinced that by completing your program I will have achieved the optimal advanced education that I seek, especially with respect to the broad variety and diversity of clinical cases and orthodontic techniques that I will have the opportunity to master. I look forward to making many lifelong connections at XXXX, as well as the broader geographical area with so many valuable resources for the advancement of orthodontics, networking and collaborating towards a more human world with more smiling faces. I have come to define myself based on my intense passion for orthodontics and my professional experience, team work, and community service. In the future, I will find enormous satisfaction as a leader in Saudi Arabia in the area of orthodontic patient care, research, and education.

 As a teenager, I had crooked, misaligned teeth. I rarely smiled because I was self-conscious. My experience as a patient who learned how to smile was the basis, the takeoff point of my interest in Orthodontics. During my third-year at King Saud University’s (KSU) College of Dentistry, I paid special attention and devoted a lot of energy to everything that had to do with Orthodontics and my special passion was immediately evident to everyone. After learning the basics of orthodontics, cephalometric tracing, arch length analysis, etc., I volunteered in to assist a Master student in his clinical sessions as an orthodontic observer and became a member of the Saudi Orthodontic Society.

 I have distinguished myself most recently not only as a resident dentist but also by my poster presentation  dealing with “Late Onset Granulomatous Reaction to Dermal Filler" a case report that I have presented at several forums including the 24 Annual Meeting of Special care Dentistry in Scottsdale, AZ, USA as well as the International Dental Conference in Riyadh, KSA. In particular, I hope to obtain a more complete understanding of the whole gambit of issues involved in treating patients with craniofacial syndromes. I also hope to continue to distinguish myself as a volunteer in California, building upon my volunteer experience in the KSA with the Oral Health Educational Preventive Program for 6-12 years old schoolchildren who are hearing and sight impaired. I thank you for considering my application to your distinguished program.

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